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Posing In An Old Building by starfire777 Posing In An Old Building by starfire777
Made and rendered in DAZ Sudio. Thanks for all views and comments.
The overall image itself grabbed my attention right away. The subject and the setting compliment each other very well. I don't know if you did it on purpose but there are a lot of really interesting angle interplays with subject and setting.
The texturing of the set looks very good. Only my opinion but I don't think Aiko was meant for the super realistic stuff.
I'm guessing that you don't use a camera. I don't but I should start. The camera is what gives the whole piece better depth, blurs the background a bit.
The girls is great. Her pose is well done and her expression nice and "soft".
Again, I am just guessing, but you may have the ambient shader on her clothing on white? If you do you may want to cut it down to a smaller # or switch to black. I have had the most luck with the matt setting and usually black spec and ambient, with the diffuse down around 75%.
You have a very good eye. I really like how you zoomed in and didn't try to get the whole girl in frame.
Keep it up!
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Submitted on
December 1, 2012
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